Formal writing swaps everyday verbs for formal ones: purchase for buy, commence for start, and inform for tell.
Formal verbs in professional writing
Not "I would like to buy this item. (in a business email)" — say "I would like to purchase this item.". Buy is correct, but too casual for business writing.
Try it: Lars: How should I start the email to the fair committee? Amina: Formally. Write 'We would like to ___ two extra tables.' Choose the word for the blank. (purchase / grab / get) Answer: purchase — A formal email uses purchase, while "grab" and "get" are casual.
Word
Pronunciation
Example
purchase
/ˈpɝtʃəs/
I would like to purchase three licenses for the software.
commence
/kəˈmɛns/
The training session will commence promptly at nine.
inform
/ɪnˈfɔrm/
Please inform the committee of any change to the schedule.
Formal words on official documents
Official documents use formal words: residence for home, assistance for help, and obtain for get.
Not "What's your current residence? (to a friend)" — say "Where do you live?". Residence belongs on forms. In conversation it sounds stiff.
Try it: Lars: What should I text Diego? He helped us carry the stand. Amina: Keep it simple and friendly. Choose Lars's text. (Thanks so much for your help with the stand. / I appreciate your assistance regarding the stand. / Your assistance with the stand is noted.) Answer: Thanks so much for your help with the stand. — A text to a friend takes the everyday noun help, while "assistance" belongs in formal writing.
Word
Pronunciation
Example
residence
/ˈrɛzɪdəns/
Applicants must provide proof of their current residence.
assistance
/əˈsɪstəns/
Thank you for your assistance with the visa paperwork.
assist
/əˈsɪst/
A colleague will assist you with the application.
obtain
/əbˈteɪn/
You can obtain a copy of the report from the front desk.
Stating an obligation
Official notices state rules with be required to + the base verb, not "supposed to" or "have to".
Not "Staff are supposed to complete the form by Friday. (in a notice)" — say "Staff are required to complete the form by Friday.". Supposed to leaves room to ignore the rule. Required to does not.
Try it: Amina: We need a sign for the loading door. What should it say? Lars: Write: 'All exhibitors ___ wear a badge at all times.' Choose the words for the blank. (are required to / are supposed to / have got to) Answer: are required to — A written rule on a sign uses are required to, while "supposed to" only reports an expectation.
Word
Pronunciation
Example
required
/rɪˈkwaɪərd/
All visitors are required to sign in at reception.
Formal verbs in business writing
Business documents use formal verbs: a company acquires a firm and advertises a post, and a candidate submits an application.
Not "Please send in your application before the deadline. (in a job ad)" — say "Please submit your application before the deadline.". A job advertisement is formal, so it takes submit.
Try it: Lars: I'm writing the last line of the park's volunteer sign-up sheet. Amina: Keep it formal: 'Volunteers may ___ their questions by email.' Choose the word for the blank. (submit / send in / hand in) Answer: submit — A formal sign-up sheet uses submit, while "send in" is less formal.
Word
Pronunciation
Example
acquire
/əˈkwaɪər/
The bank plans to acquire a local insurance firm.
advertise
/ˈædvərtaɪz/
We will advertise the vacancy on the company website.
submit
/səbˈmɪt/
Please submit your application before the deadline.
What are the common mistakes?
Incorrect
Correct
Why
I would like to buy this item. (in a business email)
I would like to purchase this item.
Buy is correct, but too casual for business writing.
What's your current residence? (to a friend)
Where do you live?
Residence belongs on forms. In conversation it sounds stiff.
Staff are supposed to complete the form by Friday. (in a notice)
Staff are required to complete the form by Friday.
Supposed to leaves room to ignore the rule. Required to does not.
Please send in your application before the deadline. (in a job ad)
Please submit your application before the deadline.
A job advertisement is formal, so it takes submit.